HAIKU

I have been lately not very active on either of my blogs; no addition to the “Chronicles of our love story” or to “Astonishing India” , no Weekly Photo challenges, no comments on the blogs of other blogger friends……absolutely nothing. But I have a valid excuse! I am almost on the last leg of my Creative Writing course and hence I was busy writing the assignment due for submission in May 2012.

I have under this course tried writing Haiku for the first time. I would like all the blogger friends to please give their opinions and advises on these :

#1.

Bare bough longing some color

Stinging words bleed the heart dry, lifeless

Has the autumn already arrived?

#2.

The deathly pale cracked earth

Rinsed, quenched, alive and bobbing paper boats

Elixir from the heaven above

#3.

Fire, wine and white snow

The melted wax and broken bangles shard

Memory of the night before

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About Shoma Abhyankar

I believe "Life is short and the world is wide"and travel is best possible solution to make the best of this life. I am Shoma Abhyankar. Welcome to ASTONISHING INDIA
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6 Responses to HAIKU

  1. eof737 says:

    Lovely job! Keep it up and then it gets easier. 😉

    Like

  2. have you forgotten a word in the first line of the first haiku? It reads oddly. I kinda like ’em – htough I also find haiku very difficult.

    Like

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