A World Remade…

In a world remade….

No mosques, no churches, no temples…

Would define religion…

‘Neath the heaven…

Just the heads would bow…

In a complete surrender!

In a world remade….

No discord, no fences, no borders…

Would provoke a war…

‘Neath the stars…

Just the eyes would rest…

In a peaceful slumber!

In a world remade…

No attire would curb her freedom…

No act would defile her being…

No dogmas would chastise her dream…

No hypocrites would preach her morals…

There would be just….

Some compassion to hold her hands..

Some encouragement to let her fly…

Some love to let her grow…

Some faith to restore her pride….

And some belief…

To let her rejoice her existence!

In a world remade….

None would beg and none would steal…

None would rape and none would kill…

‘Neath the warm sun…

Just the hands would join…

Brotherhood and contentment would prevail!

In a world remade….

No epidemic, no famine, no flood….

Would wipe humanity from the world….

‘Neath the blue skies…

In bliss would all thrive!

Oh!! In my world remade…

Love will bloom, Virtue will merit

None poor, none rich

Just the equal souls…

To celebrate the freedom…

Of Body, Mind and Spirit!!

Years ago Sri Rabindranath Tagore wrote the beautiful lines…..

Where the mind is without fear and the head is held high…

Where knowledge is free….

Where the world has not been broken into fragments…”

It still holds true… such a world  is still desired…It still is a dream. If I were to create a world, yes, I would want the human race to have a knowledge which abhors wars, discrimination, barbarism,  abuse, inhumanity, jealousy, bigotry…..I would make a world where there would not be bribery, injustice, favoritism….all would live with dignity, with their heads held high, with pride, without any fear….There would be truth, honesty, logic, reasoning, bravery, respect, reverence, camaraderie….

There would be a story for each and everyone and like a fairytale, all stories will end in ‘Happily Ever After’…….Yes!! That would be world remade by me.


india-today-conclave-2015-blogadda“I am participating in the #TheWorldRemade activity at BlogAdda in association with India Today #Conclave15 “.




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About Shoma Abhyankar

I believe "Life is short and the world is wide"and travel is best possible solution to make the best of this life. I am Shoma Abhyankar. Welcome to ASTONISHING INDIA.
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24 Responses to A World Remade…

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  2. very nicely written……………I wrote on the same topic here http://vikrams777.blogspot.in/2015/03/the-flawless-world.html plz comment your views :)


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  5. teny says:

    Congrats on the win! 🙂


  6. I am also your fellow contest winner. Just wanted to know whether you will attend the conclave. I was planning to go but was looking for some company. 🙂


  7. Congratulations Shoma! Lovely piece 🙂


  8. Swati Bassi says:

    Congratulations to you!!!!!!!!
    Have a great time at the conclave and do share your experience……….
    Best Wishes.


  9. manjulikapramod says:

    Lovely poem.. congrts for the win.


  10. Sunaina says:

    congratulations shoma….i am so happy to see u on the winner list……


  11. Sunaina says:

    Really nice….I have posted mine for this contest too and I was reading what others who have posted had to say. Of all that I have read so far, I liked yours the best. Very very beautiful, touching and sweet….Wish the world was like this….the lines I liked the most…..
    Some compassion to hold her hands
    Some encouragement to let her fly…


  12. swati bassi says:

    You have expressed your views here in a very beautiful manner.
    Wish you win!!!!


  13. Shilpa Gupte says:

    Superbly penned, Shoma! I do hope these dreams get fulfilled some day.


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